Tuesday, October 13, 2026

Maybe this

 I've tasted hunger, felt the tooth
Saw spectral figures from my youth
In dreams, then I awoke
Kids, don't smoke

I don't need to slash the night
To violate it with my light
The moon's already made its stroke
Kids, don't smoke

Someone’s here. I start to bark
In the quiet of the dark
A warning, challenge or a joke?
Kids, don’t smoke

Through the darkness and the thickness
I’ve felt the coming of the sickness
Sticky as a rum & coke
Kids, don’t smoke



1 comment:

J Blood said...

I showed this to a friend who suggested dropping the tagline, which I like. If nothing else, it makes the have a somewhat unusual shape. So another possible version:

I've tasted hunger, felt the tooth
Saw spectral figures from my youth
In dreams, then I awoke

I don't need to slash the night
To violate it with my light
The moon's already made its stroke

Someone’s here. I start to bark
In the quiet of the dark
A warning, challenge or a joke?

Through the darkness and the thickness
I’ve felt the coming of the sickness
Sticky as a rum & coke
Kids, don't smoke